“Silence & Roses” has the misfortune to be the third robots-outliving-humans story I’ve read in the last year. All three are driven by sentiment, and on that scale Palmer’s tale sits somewhere below Ken Scholes’ cloying “Edward Bear and the Very Long Walk”, and somewhere above Deborah Biancotti’s superior “King of All and the Metal Sentinel”. As in those stories, robots designed for routine are challenged by novelty (which reveals backstory, in this case that we’re in a care home walled off from the ruins of civilization outside), and their naive incomprehension drives a plot, with sentiment generated by the gap between what they understand (the residents are falling silent) and what we understand (the residents are dying). Confronted with the pointlessness of their existence, many of Palmer’s robots go a little mad; only our hero, Button-4-Circle-Peach, survives for long enough to fall into a situation where the rules he understands can apply again. It’s competently done (and the initial reveal is quite well done), but seems somewhat rule-bound itself. And that the robots’ programming recognises silence as a problem, but not strips of rotting flesh hanging off a resident’s face, is surely unlikely.
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Love a good robot story…
I thought this was bloody awful. Palmer hardly even bothers to sketch the world, the “naive incomprehension” of the robots is just plot idiocy, their melodramatic response to the revelation of their blinkered stupidity worse and all this in a story that describes a perfectly facile loop of actions and motivations.
Hmm, I thought I was being harsh on it because it was familiar. Perhaps I was being kind to it because it was familiar…
Has there been a better robots-outliving-humans story than James Patrick Kelly’s “The Best Christmas Ever”? I haven’t read “Saturn’s Children,” but I’m thinking about short stories.
http://ttapress.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1003&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=15
Some discussion of this story plus a comment and link from its author on the TTA forum IZ 223 thread.