Jonathan Abernathy You Are Kind, by Molly McGhee (Astra House, forthcoming October 17th, 2023)

I’ve always found fascinating the shifting registers of an author’s ‘voice’ as they move between fiction and non-fiction prose; McGhee’s intimate introduction to her debut novel reads like a novel-in-miniature in its own right, and is utterly captivating. I was mesmerized, in that deliciously unseating way, by the frisson of authorial vulnerability and beautiful writing. From the outset, know that you are in the hands of a Writer with this book. I mean no snobbery by saying that. What I mean is: there is a commitment here to exquisite prose, the assembling of words in unexpected formations, that both heightens and grounds the speculative nature of the story. The introduction is an assurance that McGhee is more than capable of leading you through the crystalline tragedy of Jonathan Abernathy’s life. Of life, period/full stop (delete as you prefer).
‘Jonathan Abernathy you are kind’ is one affirmation of many that the orphaned protagonist invokes for himself to get through the days of his minimum-wage, debt-weighted life. He has no friends. He may be falling in love with his neighbour, Rhoda, and her daughter, Timmy. An offer of salvation comes in the form of encouragement to apply for the job of ‘Dream Auditor,’ to rid himself of debt. The work? Cleaning the dreams of American workers so that their little worker bodies wake, refreshed and ready to give more, give it there all, each and every morning, with minds cleaned of any anxiety.
It is a job that, again, from the outset, we are told Abernathy will not survive. But he will try. He will try very hard. And the trying is this story.
There is a much pleasure as there is terror in these pages – yes, the novel makes a slide into a genre that I wasn’t expecting, but welcomed warmly, regardless – thanks to the gorgeous, surreal dreamscapes that McGhee renders: dreamscapes tempered by precise prose that sketches in, fully, the lives of the novel’s refreshingly small cast. The author’s use of the omniscient narrative voice is startling and original and leaves the denouement, still, as a genuine surprise.
The book has a lot to say about the structures, and systems, and – most importantly – the people we hold ourselves accountable to. As always with these kinds of dystopian speculations, I sincerely hope that no enterprising techie, sometime in the near future, thinks ‘hey! That novel about sucking up bad dreams to make people more productive… now *that’s* a great idea,’ because while SFF does not, should not predict futures, and does not, should not, prescribe them – there is always the danger that dreams and speculations, unleashed, can take on an after-life of their own. Jonathan Abernathy You Are Kind is a road map to empathy. Break open in times of crisis.
And it is always a crisis.
